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Demonarchangel
Posts : 32 Join date : 2010-01-29
| Subject: Kaen Numero Fri Jan 29, 2010 8:06 pm | |
| Name: Kaen Numero Nickname: Storm Demon, Posedion Age: Eighteen Bounty: 16 million beri Species: Human Occupation: Cook Allegiance: Pirate Home Village/Ocean: The Holy City Appearance: History: Kaen was born in the Holy City. He was a descendant of a World Noble, but he was not alike his parents, brothers or sisters. He cared for the people he bought. If he ever bought a person with a loved one, he would buy both or not buy at all and make it forbidden for the others to buy them. His father scolded him, but he did not care. He wore clothes, they should not wear, and breathed in the air as everyone else. He was outcasted by his family and clan. He at the time, loved to read books and taught himself how to cook. He did not buy but asked many cooks to teach him. So after years of learning, he was an amazing cook. His family found out and Kaen wanted out. He created a situation, where his family actually killed their own, he used a doll taht burnt and fell into the sea. He changed his hair colour and wore different clothing. Personality: Kaen's personality is that he is kind, calm and optimistic. He does not judge people by class or race. He hates it when people asscoiate him with the World Nobles. He shows posistive emotions. But when he fights, he becomes serious. He concentartes hard on his fights, sometimes filtering all distarctions out. Is there another side to Kaen, a more darker and cynical personality. Maybe. Find out. Ship: N/A Ship Flag: N/A Special Abilities: His abilities are mostly thanks to the lower part of his body. He has trained for many years, studying a forgotten martial arts style from the Void Century, meaning his eyes have only seen it. It usually focuses on the legs, allows the user to move quick while using fewer steps, similar to Suro, but somewhat different. The style he learnt has five levels. Jin - allows him to draw close to his opponent. Tweh - allows him to reteat from his opponent. Hweh - allows him to avoid his opponent's attack gaze. Kyuk - allows him to attack his opponent. Allows him to read an anenmy's foot technique and change its move,emts to netralize the opponent. And the Last one,Hwan - a move that affetcs the enemy's mind and will power, creating images of himself Learned Techniques : 1. Storm Step - It allows him to move amazing fast, using very few steps 2. After Flame - He heats up the ground around him, by kicking or running and can create after images, clones of himself 3. Mirror of Hell - Uses flames, he can craete a lense using light and craete illusions. 4. Jin - allows him to draw close to his opponent. 5. Tweh - allows him to reteat from his opponent. 6. Hweh - allows him to avoid his opponent's attack gaze. 7. Kyuk - allows him to attack his opponent. Allows him to read an anenmy's foot technique and change its move,emts to netralize the opponent 8. Hwan - a move that affetcs the enemy's mind and will power, creating images of himself 9. Centi Blade- combining his speed and weapon, it seems there are a hundred blades cutting the enemy Weapons/Items: Bloody Moon, Shinku. Goals: To travel and find lost cities.
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Iggy Admin
Posts : 3583 Join date : 2008-07-02 Age : 31 Location : The hearts and songs of all the worlds children.
| Subject: Re: Kaen Numero Fri Jan 29, 2010 9:39 pm | |
| Why not give the character Soru? | |
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Demonarchangel
Posts : 32 Join date : 2010-01-29
| Subject: Re: Kaen Numero Fri Jan 29, 2010 10:58 pm | |
| he uses something completely different | |
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TheBlackLuffy
Posts : 1722 Join date : 2010-01-18 Age : 31 Location : Narina
| Subject: Re: Kaen Numero Fri Jan 29, 2010 11:43 pm | |
| Soru = Kicking in place using small steps
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basically the same thing >.< | |
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Faceofbear
Posts : 94 Join date : 2009-05-25
| Subject: Re: Kaen Numero Fri Jan 29, 2010 11:50 pm | |
| Just a simple tip from someone...more fledged out in an RPing sense. Both of your character's have like the EXACT same personality. Do they really even have goth pirates? | |
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Demonarchangel
Posts : 32 Join date : 2010-01-29
| Subject: Re: Kaen Numero Fri Jan 29, 2010 11:58 pm | |
| when i wake up ina few hours, i will make it more detailed | |
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TheBlackLuffy
Posts : 1722 Join date : 2010-01-18 Age : 31 Location : Narina
| Subject: Re: Kaen Numero Sat Jan 30, 2010 12:04 am | |
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Demonarchangel
Posts : 32 Join date : 2010-01-29
| Subject: Re: Kaen Numero Sat Jan 30, 2010 9:17 am | |
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TheBlackLuffy
Posts : 1722 Join date : 2010-01-18 Age : 31 Location : Narina
| Subject: Re: Kaen Numero Sat Jan 30, 2010 11:45 am | |
| Change Infinty to One Hundred or One Thosand..
makes it sound less Gmish...
I mean like it does sound fine..I guess..
That would just make it sound better.. | |
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Iggy Admin
Posts : 3583 Join date : 2008-07-02 Age : 31 Location : The hearts and songs of all the worlds children.
| Subject: Re: Kaen Numero Sat Jan 30, 2010 12:24 pm | |
| Yes, I would lower the blade count. | |
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Layman Iconoclast Admin
Posts : 10667 Join date : 2008-07-01 Age : 32 Location : I am everywhere I see everything
| Subject: Re: Kaen Numero Sat Jan 30, 2010 3:21 pm | |
| explain all of your techniques | |
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Demonarchangel
Posts : 32 Join date : 2010-01-29
| Subject: Re: Kaen Numero Sat Jan 30, 2010 4:27 pm | |
| done name a technique and ill explain it | |
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Layman Iconoclast Admin
Posts : 10667 Join date : 2008-07-01 Age : 32 Location : I am everywhere I see everything
| Subject: Re: Kaen Numero Sat Jan 30, 2010 4:28 pm | |
| well 1-8 really... they all seem a bit veague | |
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Demonarchangel
Posts : 32 Join date : 2010-01-29
| Subject: Re: Kaen Numero Sat Jan 30, 2010 4:55 pm | |
| they will be explained in battle so the enemy can understand | |
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Layman Iconoclast Admin
Posts : 10667 Join date : 2008-07-01 Age : 32 Location : I am everywhere I see everything
| Subject: Re: Kaen Numero Sat Jan 30, 2010 4:58 pm | |
| they need to be explained here so we know what your character can do | |
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Demonarchangel
Posts : 32 Join date : 2010-01-29
| Subject: Re: Kaen Numero Sat Jan 30, 2010 5:09 pm | |
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Layman Iconoclast Admin
Posts : 10667 Join date : 2008-07-01 Age : 32 Location : I am everywhere I see everything
| Subject: Re: Kaen Numero Sat Jan 30, 2010 5:11 pm | |
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Demonarchangel
Posts : 32 Join date : 2010-01-29
| Subject: Re: Kaen Numero Sat Jan 30, 2010 5:24 pm | |
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Layman Iconoclast Admin
Posts : 10667 Join date : 2008-07-01 Age : 32 Location : I am everywhere I see everything
| Subject: Re: Kaen Numero Sat Jan 30, 2010 5:39 pm | |
| 1. Storm Step - thats soru 2. After Flame - is the attack heat ir after images, also what is the atcual attack, what do the after images do 3. Mirror of Hell - how do thease flames get made? 4. Jin - how? 5. Tweh - how? 6. Hweh - that makes no sense 7. Kyuk - how is he doing any of that? 8. Hwan - so mind control...? 9. Centi Blade- this needs the most explanation of all | |
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Demonarchangel
Posts : 32 Join date : 2010-01-29
| Subject: Re: Kaen Numero Sat Jan 30, 2010 5:48 pm | |
| okay for the five basic techniques read the manga "The Breaker chapter 39" and the flame images is from air gear the attack confuses the opponent and Kaen can attack them while they are distracted | |
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