"Raging" Halsen Talen

Name: "Raging" Halsen Talen

Age:18

Bounty: 10,000,000

Species: Human

Occupation: Captain of the Raging Pirates.

Allegiance: Pirate

Home Village/Ocean: East Blue

Appearance: Is five foot and eight inches tall. Weighs two hundred and fifty eight pounds. He is very muscular. Especially for someone who eats a lot. He wears red shirt and shorts with black and white shoes. He has red hair and sky blue eyes. He has nothing that marks him except how his clothes and hair looks like blood.

History: Halsen had found the mimikku mimikku no mi when he was eight years old at the beach. But he didn't know what it was until after he had eaten the fruit. He ate because he was hungry at the time. When it tasted horrible he brought to the villiage to see if had posion himself. He was shocked when he was told he had eaten the fruit of the devil called the mimikku mimikku no mi. Even though he was cursed to not be able to swim forever he was still able to lead an average life. Well almost normal cause he wanted to be a pirate. The reason why is because he will be able to get a lot of money too eat any amount of food he wants. He trained very hard to become a pirate. But he sort of trained to fighting against other devil fruit users. Ten years later when he was eighteen years old he set off toward the sea. But he ran into the navy when docked on the nearest island. Not wanting a single pirate to rise he was attacked. But the captain of this navy group had eaten a logia type fruit. (Will make him later.) He mimiced his devil fruit and got ready to fight the navy. But he began to lose his cool when they weren't slowing down. He then unleashed the full power of the devil fruit he had mimiced and destroyed the nearest village at the same time. He was able to escape before the navy leader could catch him. He later found his wanted poster. He was surprised that his starting wanted poster was so high.

Personality:Halsen is the kind of guy who would give his life for his friends and crew members, if any at all that is, for the fact he might need their help in the long. He also can get pissed off at even the most simplest of things and stuff that almost dosen't concern him at all. One of his most biggest traits, biggest cause he ate a devil fruit because of it, the fact he will eat anything at anytime.

Ship: Just a plain small nameless row boat.

Ship Flag: Halsen is working on it.

Name:mimikku mimikku no mi (Mimic Mimic fruit)
Capabilities: Able to mimic the ability of any other devil fruit. The user of this devil fruit must be in phyisical contact for at least three one post. But after the user has mimic the other fruit, he/she can only hold on to the new power for five minutes. (Or in the case of this site ten posts.) After the time is up the user loses the power. However he will be able to mimic again instantly. But once again must be in physical contact. Oh yeah and has to be for one post again.
Type:Paramecia

Special Abilities: Does Super strength count? In not then I would say none.

Learned Techniques (Keep it 1-25): Two form user. Soru and Shigan.
Mimic:Halsen grabs a devil fruit user and then mimics his devil fruit power.
(Name varies on devil fruit power. For example if he mimic the Gomu Gomu no mi. Then the move would be called Gomu Gomu no Rage.) [Name of fruit] Rage-After mimicing a devil fruit he would unleash it on his foes in a flurry of rage. It varies on the devil fruit type that was abosrbed. Paracemia-Starts punching in awidly manner and does it with the added bonus of the devil fruit that was mimiced. Logia-Unleashes the element that was mimiced on Halsen's opponents. Logia-Goes between the animal and then hybrid form and starts attacking like crazy.

Weapons/Items:Dagger (Only used in emergencies.)

Goals: Find One Piece and become the Pirate King!

this profile is not even fully filled out

He said not done yet, he'll get back to it I'm sure.

I had a more complete version. But then I had to let my brother use the computer. When I got back on and posted it I was logged out. Didn't know that was gonna happen. But good thing it did cause the history conflicts with the setting of this site.

references to the established cannon? (which are against character creation guidelines)

No. I made that my guy heard of One Piece when he was very young and he went out to become a pirate eight years later. But the setting is a year after Gold Roger was killed. And the treasure called One Piece wasn't heard of until his death. Now I think about it. The time that Halsen sets out to sea is simialr to Luffy. Both set out ten years after they proclaimed they will get One Piece.

yes well that cant happan anyway because the world heard about one piece one year ago

Exactly why it was a good thing that the computer logged me off before I had posted it.

...... well let us know when your done

I will pm that I am done. Now what did I type for the appearence again?

how should I know

What the...!? How did that... must have changed the subject lines by mistake. My bad.

personality is to short, bounty is to high, described him as being "like luffy", need to go on to more detail on spechal moves

...I was only comparing Halsen and Luffy but the other made sense. When I said compare I meant compare on how some of it was similar to him. He isn't really gonna be like Luffy. For one thing Halsen won't be as dumb. I'll edit all of that anyway.

Sorry for the double post but what are the special moves you are talking about? They all seem okay to me. Or is it something else?

all of them

Techniques then? If yes then I am gonna have trouble as I don't know what you want improve on it.

Part of second post:I improved the moves. I also got rid of one. But if you don't know what Shigan is then why are you a One Piece fan?

Part of third post:Uh okay when are gonna approve this or tell me what else is wrong? Also I think I might have misspelled Shigan...But I doubt it now that you wanted that to be explained.

rage is the only move I do not understand but you have waited long enugh

APPROVED

Thanks and I understand why. After rereading it when you told me that the character needed fixing. I put described it wrong. Also the move that detroyed the village in the history was his rage move. But that move is seriously hampered if I mimic the wrong devil fruit. For example the Human-Human fruit. I mean if I mimic that then I would become an regualr human who can't swim.