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PostSubject: Takahashi   Takahashi Icon_minitimeMon Aug 10, 2009 9:59 am

Name: Takahashi (\"High Bridge\")

Age: 18

Bounty: None yet

Species: Human

Occupation: Swordsmen

Allegiance: Pirate (None yet)

Home Village/Ocean: East Blue

Appearance: Black spiky hair. Light brown skin color. Black and brown almond eyes. Red flamed shirt. Black shorts. Black and red sandals.

History: Takahashi was born in a small village. His father was a blacksmiths and his mother was a housewife. When he was 10, he was interested in swords so he joined the dojo until he was 15. By 5 years he was good at sword fighting. Takahashi was good at 2 sword style fighting so his father made him 2 swords. When he was 17, his village was attacked by some pirates. He slashed off the pirates and saved the village (Thats when he got the cut scar at his back). He then decided to go on a venture to be a best swordsmen with pirates.

Personality: Quiet, Kind, Helpful, Friendly, noble and active. He always practices 2 sword style fighting in his spare time. He always pays attention in battle. He gets pissed of when he cant find enemy's weakness.

Ship: Red Dragon (Sloop)

Ship Flag: Skull with crossed swords. And also a small dragon in middle of Skull.

Devil Fruit: None

Special Abilities: 2 Style Sword fighting and Agility.

Learned Techniques: Slash Combo: The user runs towards the opponent quickly and starts to performs slash combo. Invisible Slash: The user charges his 2 swords and Runs towards the opponent almost at speed of light and slashes into half. Spinning Sword: The user spreads his 2 arms with swords and starts to spin and slash the opponent.

Weapons/Items: Katana and Smoke Bombs.
Goals: To build a strong Crew or join one. To be the best swordsmen. To be a famous pirate and find ONE PIECE!!.


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PostSubject: Re: Takahashi   Takahashi Icon_minitimeMon Aug 10, 2009 10:04 am

important notes for you:
-you do not need to keep track of items like smoke bombs, its asumbed you just have enugh for the job
-it is insefichant to describe your character as "like Zoro" could you please go in to some more detail
-a hurricane, projectiles, gaint fire dragons and summoning other such things from an ordinary sword is not only unreasnable its unexplanable, Zoro's techniques have animals in the backdrop but hes not actualy sumoning them they show what the stance he is takeing is based off of, and the "hurricane" move of his as you call it is based on the swords cutting through the air and making wind currents please explain how he is doing thease techniques
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PostSubject: Re: Takahashi   Takahashi Icon_minitimeMon Aug 10, 2009 10:26 am

Sorry. I will update it
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PostSubject: Re: Takahashi   Takahashi Icon_minitimeMon Aug 10, 2009 10:30 am

alright notify me when your done
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PostSubject: Re: Takahashi   Takahashi Icon_minitimeMon Aug 10, 2009 10:42 am

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PostSubject: Re: Takahashi   Takahashi Icon_minitimeMon Aug 10, 2009 11:09 am

-moving at the speed of light is impossible, Kizaru does it because hes becoming light with a devil fruit, if you wish to be fast use soru
-when I said you didnt need to keep track I meant of the number of bombs you need to list that you have it'
-what did he do for a bounty that high?
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PostSubject: Re: Takahashi   Takahashi Icon_minitimeTue Aug 11, 2009 3:15 am

Ok i updated it. He have the ability to run fast so he can run at almost speed of light ( Sorry i forgot to put almost ). And also i made my costum katana, Please check it. I will use that katana if it is approved.
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PostSubject: Re: Takahashi   Takahashi Icon_minitimeTue Aug 11, 2009 6:45 pm

-see your just saying things your not explaining anything, the fastest speed an extremely well trained human can move in one piece is Soru
-you must have a bounty of at least 50 to be a pirate, also your bounty will most likely not be changed after creation
-please go in to some amount of detail in your appearance and personality descriptions
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