dereku

name: dereku "claymore" jogin

age: 18

bounty: 1,000,000

species: human

occupation:swordsmen

allegiance:the claymore pirates

home village/ ocean: shimoshiki island/east blue

apperance: black spikey hair, red flame shirt, black shorts, and black and brown sandel, and hazel eyes he has two scars like a cross on his back he is 5 feet 10 inches he also wears a black vest with yellow outlines with his flags symbol on the back.

history: born in the east blue he was just a simple swordsman training to be the best when a pirate crew attacked his village he tried to fight them off but he lost they saw he had potential and took him with them he learned many things until he found the captains cursed fruit he couldn't help himself so he ran from the ship after he ate it he left the east blue and headed for the grandline but before he got to there he was attaked by the navy so using his new powers he killed them all after that his was to find one piece and become king of the pirates so he countinues to search for a crew to help him acheive his dream.

personality: he is a kind and gentle person but get him mad or attack him without any purpose he will kill you or disable for good he doesn't care about money and will do anything for his friends and works really hard to acheive his dreams

ship: the claymore

ship flag: a skull with two scottish claymores crossed on top of each other

devil fruit:kurei kurei fruit
type:logia
effect:create and control clay

special abilitys: strength, sword fighting

learned techniques: clay clone/make a clone of myself to foul my enemies, clay shot/shot hardend clay, dragon slash/i slash my sword which creates a dragon shaped design, tornado spin/slash my swords in a circular motion to create a miniture tornadoe, clay dome/ create a dome of clay to protect myself can be broken with enough force, upright slash/ slash my swords in the air , flying clay fist/ create two fists of clay and throw them, clayslide/creates slides or walls to travel with, soru/super speed, and shigan/jab my fingers with stength as strong as bullets.

weapons/items: 2 katanas, medical kit, and an impact dial

goals: to be the pirate king and one of the best swordsmen ever

you need to explain the techniques

nothing in his history gave him a bounty at all and its WAY to high

your apperance and es[pechaly personality are to short, do you need help? I have a guide for you if you like

i fixed my story described my techniques and made my personality and appearance better is it ok now

i hope you are happy with my character now

((double post))

please stop harassing admins via spam and PM, it only makes your character reviewing take longer

since your in such a hurry Im going to ignore most of the errors and focus only on weapons and techniques and while they all push the envelope considerable in the interest of getting you to leave me alone

APPROVED

i'm sorry admin-sama i get impaitiant it won't happen again i promise

no worries, your new so its excusable, and this character seems well rounded (just a question, can fire harden the clay to a rock like substance?)

i think so but i don't know if its like that i can just throw clay at them

projecting your element as an attack falls under conrtol so yes you can