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Artik the Wolf
Posts : 46 Join date : 2008-07-14 Location : Somewhere...^^
| Subject: Ghostly Pocketwatch Tue Jul 15, 2008 6:25 pm | |
| this is for my second character, Juxo "Phantom" Hiroki, and basically, it lets him hinder time a bit by making him a phantom, and when he swings it back and forth, it can summon gohstly chains form underground to wrap his enemies. It's Gold, and has a black "P" on it. It usually hangs from his pants.The only thing is the wielder can't use the watch for too long, and after an hour, the watch automatically reverts you to your normal status...
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Iggy Admin
Posts : 3583 Join date : 2008-07-02 Age : 31 Location : The hearts and songs of all the worlds children.
| Subject: Re: Ghostly Pocketwatch Tue Jul 15, 2008 6:29 pm | |
| explain a bit more, from what i can tell this seems to powerful | |
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Artik the Wolf
Posts : 46 Join date : 2008-07-14 Location : Somewhere...^^
| Subject: Edit Wed Jul 16, 2008 8:36 am | |
| this is for my second character, Juxo "Phantom" Hiroki, and basically, it lets him hinder time a bit by making him a phantom, and when he swings it back and forth, it can summon gohstly chains form underground to wrap his enemies. It's Gold, and has a black "P" on it. It usually hangs from his pants.The only thing is the wielder can't use the watch for too long, and after an hour, the watch automatically reverts you to your normal status... | |
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Captain Corkscrew Admin
Posts : 305 Join date : 2008-07-03 Age : 31 Location : That place...with the stuff...you know
| Subject: Re: Ghostly Pocketwatch Wed Jul 16, 2008 10:09 pm | |
| Now when you say hinder time does it actually stop or slow time or does it just turn him into a phantom? And an hour seems a little long, you could probably shorten the time to 30 mins and I don't think it would change things much besides balancing it more. | |
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Artik the Wolf
Posts : 46 Join date : 2008-07-14 Location : Somewhere...^^
| Subject: Edit Wed Jul 16, 2008 10:25 pm | |
| this is for my second character, Juxo "Phantom" Hiroki, and basically, it lets him slow time a bit, and makes him a phantom, and when he swings it back and forth, it can summon gohstly chains form underground to wrap his enemies. It's Gold, and has a onyx "P" on it. It usually hangs from his pants.The only thing is the wielder can't use the watch for too long, and after half an hour, the watch automatically reverts you to your normal status...It is infused with the Time Time Fruit, and because of this, is an extremely rare and valuable object.
Last edited by Artik the Wolf on Fri Jul 18, 2008 5:30 pm; edited 1 time in total | |
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Layman Iconoclast Admin
Posts : 10667 Join date : 2008-07-01 Age : 32 Location : I am everywhere I see everything
| Subject: Re: Ghostly Pocketwatch Wed Jul 16, 2008 10:43 pm | |
| this weapon can do to many things even if you gave the weapon a devil fruit it would only be able to do one thing and that thing would not effect the user | |
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Captain Corkscrew Admin
Posts : 305 Join date : 2008-07-03 Age : 31 Location : That place...with the stuff...you know
| Subject: Re: Ghostly Pocketwatch Wed Jul 16, 2008 10:46 pm | |
| You don't have to keep reposting stuff, just edit the original post and slowing down time AND turning you into a ghost seems like a little much. I can understand turning you into a ghost and calling the chains and since you lowered the time already if you just change the time slowing part I'll approve it | |
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Layman Iconoclast Admin
Posts : 10667 Join date : 2008-07-01 Age : 32 Location : I am everywhere I see everything
| Subject: Re: Ghostly Pocketwatch Wed Jul 16, 2008 10:50 pm | |
| balay that! it would need to be infused with some sort of devil fruit to explain it's power, and it must charge for 1 post (taking up one full action) to slow time for one post (this would not take up an action because it is the privious action taking effect)
get this time fruit approved sepratly with the limits I have said
change the weapon so it has this fruit once it is approved
then it can be approved
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Captain Corkscrew Admin
Posts : 305 Join date : 2008-07-03 Age : 31 Location : That place...with the stuff...you know
| Subject: Re: Ghostly Pocketwatch Wed Jul 16, 2008 10:53 pm | |
| Well, the Chief Admin knows better than me. Go with his standards, they do actually make more sense. | |
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Artik the Wolf
Posts : 46 Join date : 2008-07-14 Location : Somewhere...^^
| Subject: Re: Ghostly Pocketwatch Fri Jul 18, 2008 5:33 pm | |
| this is for my second character, Juxo "Phantom" Hiroki, and basically, it lets him slow or speed up time a bit, and makes him a phantom, when he swings it back and forth, it can summon ghostly chains form underground to wrap his enemies. It's Gold, and has a onyx "P" on it. It usually hangs from his pants.The only thing is the wielder can't use the watch for too long, and after half an hour, the watch automatically reverts you to your normal status...It is infused with the Kouin Kouin No Mi (Time Time Fruit) , and because of this, is an extremely rare and valuable object. | |
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