Serious: Usurper Pirates chapter 1: the beginning

Jack Bit the sword. "I'm a sword too. You can't kill me." Which was true, he claims he is a shark, but he's a sword with shakr-teeth.

Oh really? Don flipped his sword so the sharp side was towards Jacks head No living being is immortal in this world even if you want to be,Ive destroyed far better swords than you.

(( double post here but yea, u mean Jack is like that CP9 leaders elephant sword? well something in that way ))

((Jack The Ripping Blade))

(( so its Alphonse sword..ohh my bad..sorry >.< but its like that leaders sword,i think, anyway lets forget those last replys ^^;; ))

Jack flung himself teeth first onto don's blade, pushing down in a parry. "Not if I rip out your organs first!" Alphonse took jack by the handle and shook him. "He's a friend."

Don stared at Jack then looked at Alphonse He may be ur companion,but keep him in check..Dont let the weapon control you,YOU must control it.. Don looked at Alphonse with an serius stare then waved and said Well..now i gotta find Doc..Cya later kid

Alphonse waved back. "Bye..." Then he returned to his previous posture.

"Guys! Wheeler's retreating let's get the hell out of here!" Treant yelled while pulling away. The ship drifted away, but cannon fire still chased it, "stop the guns!"

Alphonse sank lower into depression. Nothing he can do about guns...

"Hey, what do you think I was doing" Rushie yelled out as he was joking with the captain. As cannons flew by, Rushie sliced each cannon coming by half, some exploding in his face.

The cannon fire stopped, slowly, as the fleet gave up. "they're stopping! Raise sails! Get the hell outta here!!" Treant yelled, and then he searched for Alphonse. "Kid, we need to talk..."

Don noticed Treants approach on Alphonse and whisperd to him -If ur gonna yell at him,dont,hes down alrdy- Don walked off yelling -Doc,Where the hell are you??-

"I'm the captain, I know what I'm doing. Now, if you want to be captain, go ahead. But get off my ship. Now, I've got a plan! Get on raising the sails!" Treant yelled at Don loudly. Then he walked to the room Alphonse was in. "Kid, I get that you're feeling down, feeling like you don't have much you can do, but just think for a sec... if it weren't for you, we wouldn't be getting away. You protected the ship, and faught off a few marines. Now, if you can't stop some guns, that's an acceptable loss." Treant patted him on the head, "you're my firstmate, trust me, you're awesome... NOW CHIN UP SOLDIER!!!" Treant yelled, hoping to excite the kid.

vato saw that wheeler was retreating and wanted to chase him, but he knew the captain would get mad if he did, so he looked where the captain and the ship were, and saw alphonse sitting, he knew he was down and decided to go for a talk later, then he reminded someone needed help he landed on the ship near the captain,''captain, was it me or was there a wounded one who needed my help here, anyways we need t get going soon I saw more marine ships coming when I was in the air'' vato grabbed his bag and readied some herbs

Rushie quickly ran over to the sails and lowered them. He then ran over to the ship's steering wheel and steered the boat away towards leaving the island. "Hey, I better get a bed for this" Rushie yelled at the captain.

Alphonse looked at treant with a little bit of happiness, but there was something still was bothering him. ((You'll find out next arc.))

After a rough escape, the ship had made it to a strange island filled with scum...

THE END...
((Is it his time of the month? JK))

((It's a G.U. referance.))

((I have to say, this was a good begining. Can't wait for the next chapter...))

((Any enemies I can arrange for us to fight? Anybody you really wanna fight guys? Remember, we are a small team...))

((nothing comes to mind...Think of a story for it without a fight just in case. Hikaru I've got saved for the Wavy Reds.))

well I got a marine assasin guy who was in the marine crew of stormcrow but they al left so I can let him die in that fight Couse I wanted to get rid of it for a new devil fruit user

we can go with that Redmerv, but we will need another enemy... lemme see who else we can use with him.

No one got anything?