Jaden T. Corin

Name: Jaden Tristin Corin "Shadow"

Age: 19

Species: Human

Occupation: Bounty Hunter

Allegiance: Neutral

Home Village/Ocean: East

Flag: A shield with the initial BHA over it with the Belli symbol under the initials

Appearance: Jaden is about 6.00' tall. He has short blond hair and has a white complexion. His eyes are blue. He caries no weapons. He wears all black clothing with long pants and a short-sleeved shirt.

History: At the age of 5, pirates raded Jaden's town killing his mother and father as well as his younger brother. Jaden ran farther into the island, he reached another town and warned the towns people. They all left without him. One of the villagers told that if he got left behind he should eat the fruit in the chest in his house. As soon as he realized they had left he ate the fruit. The pirates came were going to kill Jaden, but Jaden used his devil fruit power and defeated them all. He traveled to yet another town and was adopted by Jacen and his wife Alu. They raised him until the age if eighteen when he left with a group of bounty hunters, but he was kicked out of the group and short time later and is now searching for another group to join.

Weapons: Quake Hammer

Learned Techniques: 1. Shadow Strike: Jaden turns into the foes shadow, then re-appears behind the foe and attack him(The just thinks he disappears, Jaden can't be hurt in shadow form) 2. Shadow Steal: Jaden takes control of his foe's shadow causing his foe to do whatever his shadow does(it lasts a few seconds, also he can't knock out the shadow) 3. Shadow Sneak: Jaden turns into a nearby shadow and can move from one to another undetected(He can't attack in this state, he must become normal again before he can attack and can't turn into a shadow for some time. He could be the shadow of anything.) 4. Shadow Control: Jaden uses the of a nearby object (Other than a person) to attack his foe. 5. Quake line: Jaden slams the hammer on the ground and sends a shockwave in a straight line. 6. Quake Slame: Jaden foe with hammer and causes a powerful shockwave under the foe. 7. Dimension Change: Using his control over shadows Jaden changes the dimensions of his hammer, lasting for one turn. (Only used once every 5 posts at most.)

Devil Fruit: Abyss Abyss Fruit
type: Logia (I think)
effect: ability to control and manipulate shadows and to turn into a shadow

I do agree his power didn't always make much sense so I changed them to make a bit more sense. Please let me know what you think.

Youve set poper limitations, thus you are Aproved!!!

what? as the cheif Admin I here by Cancle the approval NOT APPROVED YET! the shade shade fruit is not a registered or cannon DF, also you many of your techniques make no sense UNAPPROVED!!! untill these mestakes are fixed, how dare you approve such a thing Iggy? ho is this person going to lern the ropes if we dont show them?

why is he he scull x, we could be sued, take off the pic and describe him

he and or she left prpor limitations, I dont see the problems... the stuff only lasts afew seconds, and some you cant even attck someone whilst it commenses. explain the problems

the shade shade fruit is not a registered or cannon DF, also many of the techniques make no sense

well considering that there devil fruit powers it kindof does make sense

shodows are not invisible, nor can they attack something phisicaly...

Well how about its just hard to see?
If Dartz can be aproved so can he.

your right in this day and age you need illogical powers just to stay alive and Dartz's approval is coming in to question

REAPPROVED!!! BUT get that DF approved OK Sanjikrazy?

You didnt need to unaprove him and or her in the first place, you could have just said that he and or she needed to get the DF aproved...

his techniques still make absolutly no sense to me but what ever +

(man this guy will be fun. he uses things that Xark controls. He wont stand a chance against him.(grin))

if you edit the character sheet you should post something saying so, that way we can find it easier, just for future refrence.

Ok, but where would I put that other than on the character sheet? Is he still approved?

what?

you still edit it onto the character sheet but you make a reply on the page saying that you edited him, and yes hes still aproved.

Ok. I still need to get the fruit approved, but I'm working that out with Admin-sama

I changed the name of the fruit to go with the one I just got approved. Also, could I add a few more abilities to the character as they get stronger? I'll make sure I get them approved first before I use them.

APPROVED!!!

Yay! I can finally start pring!

I changed my flag to that of the bounty hunters association because I'm a member now.

K

I added ability #4 please check it.

How dose that work?