thease could have been seprite sheets and just beeen two freinds that look out for eachother... it seems needlessly complicated to combine them in to one sheet and Im not entirely sure where the descriptions of one of theam began and the other eneded
all that said thease are some rather well developed characters and I can see you have a kneack for writing and their abilities arrent that unreasnable as manipulating only works if the other player falls for it so
APPROVED but for all intents and purposes thease are seprite characters (bonus points if you put them in sepriate sheets/threads)